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letter to parents about job in austrail to stay with hom and look after their 6 years old baby

letter to parents about job in austrail to stay with hom and look after their 6 years old baby KkbR

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to show my interest in an advertisement in Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and take care of your six-year-old child. My name is Amita Dholakia. I am from Gujrat the state of India. I would like to join this job because I like to visit abroad for many reasons I am a good learner and I want to start reasearch on my upcoming project. For example, I am an enthusiastic person to know the culture of other countries moreover I have good proficiency of English language to communicate with your baby. Let me explain how I am a suitable person to employ. I am post graduate in Arts. I am planning to enroll for Ph. D the next year. Furthermore, I decided to choose the topic the family cultural differences of my country and overseas country. Thus, I can start my research for this task. Moreover, I will take care of your child indeed it will helpful for me to know your culture in detail like behavior, values of family members, teamwork among family members and so on while I will be with her in the home. In addition, when I will be free I would like to take around near by places to enhance my knowledge by local people’s values and beliefes in their family. I would like to explore some places in the city also. I will be happy if you give me a chance to work. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Amita Dholakia.

Dear Sir/Madam,

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I will be happy if you give me a chance to work.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely
,

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