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You paid for a one month English Language course at a college overseas but you cannot attend. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter Introduce yourself and give details of the course. Explain why you are unable to attend the course. Say what you would like to do

You paid for a one month English Language course at a college overseas but you cannot attend. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter Introduce yourself and give details of the course. Explain why you are unable to attend the course. Say what you would like to do BJLgV

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you, as the college administrator, to inform you that I will not be attending the English course this semester. My Name is Sam and I am an English literature major from the UK. Last month, I saw your advertisement for the creative writing. Which is something I wanted to learn so much. Unfortunately, things did not go as planned because I recently been in a car accident and I broke my leg. In addition, I am going to have a surgery and probably have to rest in bed for a period of time. Consequently, I think it is going to be very difficult for me to attend the class. For this reason, I want to ask you fi I could attend the next scheduled course. If it is possible, I want to know when it is supposed to be. I do hope to study in your college and look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sam O’Reilly

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you, as the college administrator, to inform you that I will not be attending the English course this semester.

My Name is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Sam, and
Sam and
 I am an English literature major from the UK. Last month, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 your advertisement for the creative writing. “Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
 is something I wanted to learn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much.

Unfortunately, things did not go as planned This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I recently been in a car accident and I broke my leg. In addition
, I am going to have a surgery and probably
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 rest in bed for a period of time. Consequently
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is going to be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 difficult for me to attend the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
.

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, I want to ask you Possible spelling mistake found.phiFIIifFMFBI
fi
 I could attend the next
 scheduled course. If it is possible, I want to know when it is supposed
 to be.

I do hope to study in your college and look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Sam O’Reilly