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introduce yourself. say why you are making this trip. ask some questions about the city (e.g., places to see, things to do, things to bring)

introduce yourself. say why you are making this trip. ask some questions about the city (e. g. , places to see, things to do, things to bring) 3aWb5
Dear Yolanda, How are you? I am Jane Doe, cousin of Abigail Bridge, your former university coursemate. Abigail sent her regards and hoped you’re doing well in Italy. I am planning to visit your city, Florence this summer. Visiting Italy has always been my travel bucket list, given that I am an architectural student. I am deeply interested in Classical architecture during the Renaissance period, and where else can I visit but Italy, the birthplace of the Renaissance itself! Abigail informed me that you spent most of your childhood in Florence, which makes you the perfect person to refer to revolving my coming vacation. Since I’ve never been to Italy, I would like to fully utilise my time there. Apart from the famous architectural attractions, do you have any other destinations to recommend? I am also keen on local activities that showcase local art and culture. In addition, do advice if I need to carry specific items to Florence. Considering I will be travelling during the summer season, will a basic sunblock (50+SPF) suffice? Do let me know if you think I need further sun and UV protection. Looking forward to hearing from you soon, Jane
Dear Yolanda,

How are you? I am Jane Doe, cousin of Abigail Bridge, your former university
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. Abigail
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sent
her regards and hoped you’re doing well in Italy.

I am planning to visit your city, Florence this summer. Visiting Italy has always been my travel bucket list,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
that I am an architectural student. I am
deeply
interested in Classical architecture during the Renaissance period, and where else can I visit
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but
Italy, the birthplace of the Renaissance itself! Abigail informed me that you spent most of your childhood in Florence, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
you the perfect person to refer to revolving my coming vacation.

Since I’ve never been to Italy, I would like to
fully
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utilise
my time there. Apart from the
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famous
architectural attractions, do you have any other destinations to recommend? I am
also
keen on local activities that showcase local art and culture.
In addition
, do advice if I need to carry specific items to Florence. Considering I will be travelling during
Consider using "summer".
the summer season
, will a basic sunblock (50+SPF) suffice? Do
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let
me know if you
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think
I need
further
sun and UV protection.

Looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
,

Jane
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IELTS letter introduce yourself. say why you are making this trip. ask some questions about the city (e. g. , places to see, things to do, things to bring)

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  American English
6 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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