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A close friend told you recently about a major argument she has had with her parents Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain that you understand the reasons why they argued. • Describe a similar situation that happened to you once. • Suggest some activities to clear your friend up.

A close friend told you recently about a major argument she has had with her parents Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain that you understand the reasons why they argued. • Describe a similar situation that happened to you once. • Suggest some activities to clear your friend up. pRe1w
Dear Tim, How are you? and hoping the family is doing well. Just writing to guide you to handle such unpleasant situations with parents. I know that your exams are very close and you need to prepare very well. This is because the grades in this exam will decide the college for your bachelor’s course. Perhaps, your parents are concerned at this point of time as you have been hanging out with other friends for last two week and not focusing on your studies. Something similar happened to me five years back. I too wasn’t concentrating on preparation during the preparatory leave. Consequently, I couldn’t get the desired score, which was required to get admission in a top notch college. It did not end here, I also found it hard to find a decent job in elite companies due to low marks in the course. Anyway, I would ask you to come over for a coffee in Starbucks coffee situated in Grand Mall and this will make you lighter and express your thoughts freely. Later, we can go for cinema to see the latest James Bond movie, which is your all-time favourite character. Looking forward to meeting you on Sunday at 6: 30 pm. Best, Sammy
Dear Tim,

How are you?
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and
hoping the family is doing well.

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Just
writing to guide you to handle such unpleasant situations with parents. I know that your exams are
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very
close and you need to prepare
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very
well. This is
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because
the grades in this exam will decide the college for your bachelor’s course. Perhaps, your parents
are concerned
at this point of time as you have been hanging out with other friends for last two week and not focusing on your studies.

Something similar happened to me five years back.
Consider using commas to set off 'too', if you want to emphasize an abrupt change of thought.
I too
wasn’t concentrating on preparation during the preparatory
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leave
.
Consequently
, I couldn’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the desired score, which
was required
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
admission in a
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
top notch
college. It did not
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end
here, I
also
found it
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hard
to find a decent job in elite
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companies
due to low marks in the course.

Anyway, I would ask you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
over for a coffee in Starbucks coffee situated in Grand Mall and this will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you lighter and express your thoughts
freely
. Later, we can go for cinema to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the latest James Bond movie, which is your all-time
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
character.

Looking forward to meeting you on Sunday at 6: 30 pm.

Best,

Sammy
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IELTS letter A close friend told you recently about a major argument she has had with her parents Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain that you understand the reasons why they argued. • Describe a similar situation that happened to you once. • Suggest some activities to clear your friend up.

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