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You are writing for a company. You need to take days off and want to ask to your manager

You are writing for a company. You need to take days off and want to ask to your manager YLkdn
Dear Tania I am writing this letter to you regarding taking some unpaid days for next month. My sister's marriage is happening next month on April9, 2020 in Toronto. For that we have to do some preparations in advance and invite guests. Moreover, I am the only person in my family to take responsibility of this event to support my parents. Apart from this, we have so many tasks to pursue. To participate on this occasion I would need to be away from work for a week from April 9 to April15. My schedule for this week is relatively light. I already talked to one of my coworkers to take care some of my projects, for Meetings which I handed out her yesterday. She has agreed to play her role in my absence. So, i will be grateful to you if you will approve my request to attend the wedding of my sister. Your' faithfully Lilly
Dear Tania

I am writing this letter to you regarding taking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
unpaid days for
next
month.

My sister's marriage is happening
next
month on April9, 2020 in Toronto. For that we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
preparations in advance and invite guests.
Moreover
, I am the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
person in my family to take responsibility of this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
to support my parents. Apart from this, we have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
tasks to pursue.

To participate on this occasion I would need to be away from work for a week from April 9 to April15. My schedule for this week is
relatively
light. I already talked to one of my coworkers to take care
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of my projects, for Meetings which I handed out her yesterday. She has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
to play her role in my absence.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
will be grateful to you if you will approve my request to attend the wedding of my sister.

Your'
faithfully


Lilly
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IELTS letter You are writing for a company. You need to take days off and want to ask to your manager

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
155 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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