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There is a problem in the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter introduce yourself explain what the problem is tell the councilor what you would like to be done

There is a problem in the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter introduce yourself explain what the problem is tell the councilor what you would like to be done 7a0Lb
I am writing this letter to inform you about a road issue which is outside my house on Avenue Road. My name is Ricky Tran, and I have been living at number 26 Avenue Road for 13 years. I have never had any complaint to the council before. Two weeks ago, a plothole appeared on the road in front of my house. I mean it is a large hole and on a rainy day, the hole is filled with water, so it might be dangerous for drivers who are not paying enough attention. The pothole is also an eyesore for those who are living in the vicinity. I have tried to call to the council offices so many time, but nothing has been done. So, I would like to request you can address this matter as soon as possible. I look forward to the problem being resolved. Yours faithfully. Ricky Tran
I am writing this letter to inform you about a road issue which is outside my
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house
on Avenue Road.

My name is Ricky Tran, and I have been living at number 26 Avenue Road for 13 years. I have never had any complaint to the council
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before
.

Two weeks ago, a
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plothole
appeared on the road in front of my
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house
. I mean it is a large hole and on a rainy day, the hole
is filled
with water,
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so
it might be
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dangerous
for drivers who are not paying
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enough
attention. The pothole is
also
an eyesore for those who are living in the vicinity.

I have tried to call to the council offices
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so
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many time
,
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but
nothing has
been done
.
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So
, I would like to request you can address this matter as
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soon
as possible.

I look forward to the problem
being resolved
.

Yours
faithfully
.

Ricky Tran

IELTS letter There is a problem in the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter introduce yourself explain what the problem is tell the councilor what you would like to be done

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  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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