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In your apartment building there is an entrance hall which you share with your neighbours. Recently there have been some problems with this shared area. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter introduce yourself and describe the problem or problems suggest what could be done to improve the situation suggest a meeting to talk about it

In your apartment building there is an entrance hall which you share with your neighbours. Recently there have been some problems with this shared area. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter introduce yourself and describe the problem or problems suggest what could be done to improve the situation suggest a meeting to talk about it e5wE7
Dear Neighbours, Hello, I am Shahd, your neighbour. I moved to this building recently. And my family really found this area very welcoming and lovely. But the problem, it is really disturbing the sound of high music that comes from your apartment. I love your music taste, but my kids cannot sleep from it and they found it annoying. For that, I want to ask you to lower the music, voice during the week days. However my children want to do their homeworks and study for their exams. Also there are some nice coffee shops down the street who play nice songs based on the customer order for a little tip. Moreover, I do not want to sound rude with this message. I would love to meet you face to face and have a talk about my text to you. Tell me when it's a good time for you to meet. I look forward for your replay best regards Shahd
Dear
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Neighbours
,

Hello, I am
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Shahd
, your
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neighbour
. I
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moved
to this building recently. And my family
really
found this area
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very
welcoming and lovely.
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But
the problem, it is
really
disturbing the sound of high music that
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comes
from your apartment. I
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love
your music taste,
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but
my kids cannot sleep from
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it and
they found it annoying.

For that, I want to ask you to lower the music, voice during the week days.
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However
my children want to do their
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homeworks
and study for their exams.
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Also
there are
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some
nice coffee shops down the street who play nice songs based on the customer order for a
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little
tip.

Moreover
, I do not want to sound rude with this message. I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you face to face and have a talk about my text to you.
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Tell
me when it's a
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good
time for you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
.

I look forward for your replay

best regards

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Shahd

IELTS letter In your apartment building there is an entrance hall which you share with your neighbours. Recently there have been some problems with this shared area. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter introduce yourself and describe the problem or problems suggest what could be done to improve the situation suggest a meeting to talk about it

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
159 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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