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In response to the news bulletin below, write a letter to the World Heritage Committee. In your letter Express your joy Explain why the new site is significant Mention a personal memory connected to the site Write bw 100 and 150 words. New World Heritage site in our region

In response to the news bulletin below, write a letter to the World Heritage Committee. In your letter Express your joy Explain why the new site is significant Mention a personal memory connected to the site Write bw 100 and 150 words. New World Heritage site in our region BpJX
Dear World Heritage Committee, I am writing to express my joy about the new site, the Owl Forest. I am so glad, that after all, this wood finally got into the World Heritage. My family and I visited the forest last week, and I was truly gorgeous. The gigantic trees and the rushing rivers were wonderful sights. In my opinion, it is certainly important, to protect the different species, especially if they are endangered. Luckily, these owls have a populous population, however, it could change pretty easily if something happens to this forest. It is also important, to assure enough space for the diverse species. As I think, 50 700 hectares is an immense area, I am honestly pleased. Sincerely, Lilla Kiss
Dear World Heritage Committee,

I am writing to express my joy about the new site, the Owl Forest. I am
so
glad, that
after all
, this wood
finally
got
into the World Heritage. My family and I visited the forest last week, and I was
truly
gorgeous. The gigantic trees and the rushing rivers were wonderful sights.

In my opinion, it is
certainly
important
, to protect the
different
species,
especially
if they
are endangered
. Luckily, these owls have a populous population,
however
, it could
change
pretty
easily
if something happens to this forest.

It is
also
important
, to assure
enough
space for the diverse species. As I
think
, 50 700 hectares is an immense area, I am
honestly
pleased
.

Sincerely
,

Lilla
Kiss
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IELTS letter In response to the news bulletin below, write a letter to the World Heritage Committee. In your letter Express your joy Explain why the new site is significant Mention a personal memory connected to the site Write bw 100 and 150 words. New World Heritage site in our region

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  American English
6 paragraphs
121 words
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