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1. You are doing an evening curse. Write a letter to the principal of your school and explain that the course that you are taking is slightly different I the way it is delivered from the school offered. In your letter, • Provide the details of the course • Explain what the problem is • Give some suggestions to fix the problem

1. You are doing an evening curse. Write a letter to the principal of your school and explain that the course that you are taking is slightly different I the way it is delivered from the school offered. In your letter, • Provide the details of the course • Explain what the problem is • Give some suggestions to fix the problem 82nm
Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of the students of Accounting for Non-accountant course at Dhaka University and I am writing to inform you that the course curriculum of the course is slightly different from the prospectus, provided at the time of admission notice. This is an evening course, specially designed to teach the basics of Accounting to the individuals, not having any idea pertaining to that field. From the prospectus of the course, I got to know that this course would be organized and taught in such a way in order that every professional will be able to understand the financial statements of companies. Unfortunately, after doing three classes, I have realised that the course was not designed for the novice at accounting. I would rather say it is for the intermediate level students rather than for the beginners. This is because we have started to do Company Analysis instead of doing Individual accounting. In this situation, I think it would be better if you could please review the course structure and take the necessary strides to make changes. Otherwise, we would assuredly fall into despondency due to not understanding any teaching materials. I am fervently looking forward to receiving your considerate response. Yours faithfully, Aditi Alam.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am one of the students of Accounting for Non-accountant
course
at Dhaka
University and
I am writing to inform you that the
course
curriculum of the
course
is
slightly
different
from the prospectus, provided at the time of admission notice.

This is an evening
course
,
specially
designed to teach the basics of Accounting to the individuals, not having any
idea
pertaining to that field. From the prospectus of the
course
, I
got
to know that this
course
would
be organized
and taught in such a way in order that every professional will be able to understand the financial statements of
companies
.

Unfortunately, after doing three classes, I have
realised
that the
course
was not designed for the novice at accounting. I would
rather
say it is for the intermediate level students
rather
than for the beginners. This is
because
we have
started
to do
Company
Analysis
instead
of doing Individual accounting.

In this situation, I
think
it would be better if you could
please
review the
course
structure and take the necessary strides to
make
changes
.
Otherwise
, we would
assuredly
fall into despondency due to not understanding any teaching materials.

I am
fervently
looking forward to receiving your considerate response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Aditi
Alam
.
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IELTS letter 1. You are doing an evening curse. Write a letter to the principal of your school and explain that the course that you are taking is slightly different I the way it is delivered from the school offered. In your letter, • Provide the details of the course • Explain what the problem is • Give some suggestions to fix the problem

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  American English
8 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
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