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Dear Mr Coleman,
I am writing to request the return of the $800 deposit that I paid to you before I rented #21 Britannia Court for the month of April. When I telephoned your office I was told that you are not intending to repay this money and I am unable to understand the reason for this.
When I signed the rental agreement it was my understanding that the deposit would be returned if the apartment was vacated clean and undamaged. This was the condition of the flat when I returned the keys. I cleaned the whole apartment and there were no breakages and no damage to fittings and furniture.
I believe that I have kept to the terms of the agreement and therefore I respectfully request that my deposit be repaid in full. I shall have no alternative but to seek legal advice if we are unable to resolve this matter in a satisfactory manner.
Your sincerely, Alexey
Dear Mr Coleman,
I am writing to request the return of the $800 deposit that I paid to you I rented #21 Britannia Court for the month of April. When I telephoned your office I was that you are not intending to repay this I am unable to understand the reason for this.
When I signed the rental agreement it was my understanding that the deposit would
I believe that I have to the terms of the agreement and shall have no alternative to seek legal advice if we are unable to resolve this matter .
I am writing to request the return of the $800 deposit that I paid to you
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beforeThis phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
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money andWhen I signed the rental agreement it was my understanding that the deposit would
be returned
if the apartment was vacated
clean and undamaged. This was the condition of the flat when I returned the keys. I cleaned the whole apartment and there were no breakages and no damage to fittings and furniture.I believe that I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
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I respectfully
request that my deposit be repaid in full. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
IThis phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
butConsider replacing "in a satisfactory manner" with the adverb for "satisfactory"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a satisfactory mannerDid you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Yoursincerely
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IELTS letter You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the landlord will not return your deposit.
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American English
5 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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- Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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