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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived at home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what is contents were

Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived at home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what is contents were eYR7
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to ask you to help me to find my lost hand luggage. Last Wednesday I flew from London to Vancouver on L118 and my seat was 25A. When I came to the plane I have put my handbag on the shelf above my seats. When the plane took off I have already fallen asleep because was very tired and it was a rather busy day for me. I slept a whole journey and the stewardess woke me up when all passengers already left the plane. I have harried up to leave the plane and totally forgot about my bag. My bag is a leather black color with two pockets. The bag, besides some usual things which necessary for the business trip, like t-shirts, socks, and other things, contains very important it is a small gift for my wife and son. I would be very appreciated if you let me know if you have my luggage and how can I able take it back. Please call me on my mobile phone or write an email. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Alexey
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to ask you to
In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help me find"?
help me to find
my lost hand luggage.

Last Wednesday I flew from London to Vancouver on L118 and my seat was 25A.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
I came to the
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plane
I have put my handbag on the shelf above my seats. When the
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plane
took off I have already fallen asleep
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because
was
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very
tired and it was a
rather
busy day for me. I slept a whole journey and the stewardess woke me up when all passengers already
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left
the
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plane
. I have harried up to
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leave
the
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plane
and
totally
forgot about my bag.

My bag is a leather black color with two pockets. The bag,
besides
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some
usual things which necessary for the business trip, like t-shirts, socks, and other things, contains
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very
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important
it is a
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small
gift for my wife and son.

I would be
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very
appreciated if you
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let
me know if you have my luggage and how can
Did you mean "I am"?
I
able take it back.
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Please
call me on my mobile phone or write an email.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
, Alexey
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IELTS letter Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived at home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what is contents were

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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