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You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. 5eAN
Dear Mr. Colleman,
I am writing this letter to express my deep unsatisfactory with the news concern about the summer work placement program. I have just heard bad news from school that this program was canceled.
One of the reasons why I chose to study a Business English course from June to August in your school is because the summer work placement was included in the program. When I started to seek a Business English course I have found a lot of schools that offer a similar course but no many who offer work in the local company as a part of the course. And despite the fact that your school has a pretty expensive offer I decided to take it because your program was a promise a better quality. But now I am very disappointed that I will not get all of your offers to me.
As a course program is very different than have bought before and I think it will be fair if you could return all my money back.
I look forward to hearing an answer from you soon.
Your sincerely,
Alexey.
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I look forward to hearing an answer from you.
Alexey.
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IELTS letter You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled.
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