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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.

You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. 6edK

Hi, Kirill, How are you, I hope you are doing well? First of all, I want to say thank you very much for your invitation to come and visit you in Canada. I am very regret but, at the moment I will not be able to accept your invitation and come to visit you as we planned with you and I hope that will not ruin your plan. The reason why I will not be able to come is a very busy schedule at work, the fact is that we are finishing a very serious project in which I participate, and my promotion depends on the results of this project. I am sure that you will understand. What do you think could we postpone our plans? According to my estimates, I will be free at the end of May, and if you do not mind, and if it possible for you, I can come to visit you in June for a couple of weeks, and maybe even more. I look forward to hearing from you.

Hi, Possible spelling mistake found.Krill
Kirill
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 and visit you in Canada.

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 serious project in which I participate, and my promotion depends on the results of this project. I am sure that you will understand.

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 of May, and if you do not mind, and if Did you mean "it is"?it is
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 possible for you, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
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 to visit you in June for a couple of weeks, and maybe even more.

I look forward to hearing from you. 