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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher

You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher y9NE
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in reference to an advertisement that I saw in the local newspaper “Harwards evening”. In the newspaper dated on 25th November I saw that our college community is looking for a teacher for night classes. This advertisement has caught my attention and I want to participate as a teacher for the course Basic for Design. Let me introduce myself, I am a Design Engineer with working experience of over 13 years in the Mechanical engineering field. I participated in different projects and I think this is an excellent ability that I could bring and share my knowledge with the students. My course program will concern all aspects of design begin a basic rule of drawings and the end of modern tendencies and nowadays changes in this field. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon Yours faithfully, Alexey
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in reference to an advertisement that I
saw
in the local newspaper “
Harwards
evening”.

In the newspaper dated on 25th November I
saw
that our college community is looking for a teacher for night classes. This advertisement has caught my attention and I want to participate as a teacher for the course Basic for Design.

Let
me introduce myself, I am a Design Engineer with working experience of over 13 years in the Mechanical engineering field. I participated in
different
projects and I
think
this is an excellent ability that I could bring and share my knowledge with the students. My course program will concern all aspects of design
begin
a basic
rule
of drawings and the
end
of modern tendencies and nowadays
changes
in this field.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon


Yours
faithfully
,

Alexey
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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  American English
6 paragraphs
147 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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