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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher y9NE
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in reference to an advertisement that I saw in the local newspaper “Harwards evening”.
In the newspaper dated on 25th November I saw that our college community is looking for a teacher for night classes. This advertisement has caught my attention and I want to participate as a teacher for the course Basic for Design.
Let me introduce myself, I am a Design Engineer with working experience of over 13 years in the Mechanical engineering field. I participated in different projects and I think this is an excellent ability that I could bring and share my knowledge with the students. My course program will concern all aspects of design begin a basic rule of drawings and the end of modern tendencies and nowadays changes in this field.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon
Yours faithfully,
Alexey
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in reference to an advertisement that I in the local newspaper “ evening”.
In the newspaper dated on 25th November I that our college community is looking for a teacher for night classes. This advertisement has caught my attention and I want to participate as a teacher for the course Basic for Design.
me introduce myself, I am a Design Engineer with working experience of over 13 years in the Mechanical engineering field. I participated in projects and I this is an excellent ability that I could bring and share my knowledge with the students. My course program will concern all aspects of design a basic of drawings and the of modern tendencies and nowadays in this field.
I am looking forward to hearing from you
Yours
Alexey
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher
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- Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
- Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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- Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
- Check your writing for errors
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