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You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

Dear Sir/Madam, I'm writing to apply for mechanical maintenance engineer position posted by your agency last week in the employment section of the local newspaper, i would appreciated if you spare some time and gave me the opportunity for an interview. I'm Mostafa a 32 years old mechanical engineer with an extensive experience in rotating equipment's maintenance and operation. I would like to work as a mechanical maintenance engineer in rotating and static equipment's which allow me to extend my experience and gain more knowledge in this field. Being experienced for more than 8 years allow me to gain extensive knowledge in operation and maintenance of these critical equipment's, commissioned more than 5 compressors and ten tanks, participated in many major overhauls and leading a team of 10 technicians making me thinks of more growth in this field. Looking forward hearing from you. Yours faithfullyMostafa
Dear Sir/Madam, I'm writing to apply for mechanical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
maintenance
engineer position posted by your agency last week in the employment section of the local newspaper,
Did you mean “I”?
i
would
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appreciated
if you spare
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some
time and gave me the opportunity for an interview. I'm
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Mostafa
a 32 years
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old
mechanical engineer with an extensive experience in rotating equipment's
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maintenance
and operation. I would like to work as a mechanical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
maintenance
engineer in rotating and static equipment's which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to extend my experience and gain more knowledge in this field.
Being experienced
for more than 8 years
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to gain extensive knowledge in operation and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
maintenance
of these critical equipment's, commissioned more than 5 compressors and ten tanks, participated in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
major overhauls and leading a team of 10 technicians making me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
of more growth in this field. Looking forward hearing from you. Yours
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.
faithfullyMostafa

IELTS letter You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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