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You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

Dear Sir/Madam, I'm writing to apply for mechanical maintenance engineer position posted by your agency last week in the employment section of the local newspaper, i would appreciated if you spare some time and gave me the opportunity for an interview. I'm Mostafa a 32 years old mechanical engineer with an extensive experience in rotating equipment's maintenance and operation. I would like to work as a mechanical maintenance engineer in rotating and static equipment's which allow me to extend my experience and gain more knowledge in this field. Being experienced for more than 8 years allow me to gain extensive knowledge in operation and maintenance of these critical equipment's, commissioned more than 5 compressors and ten tanks, participated in many major overhauls and leading a team of 10 technicians making me thinks of more growth in this field. Looking forward hearing from you. Yours faithfullyMostafa

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 of more growth in this field. Looking forward hearing from you. Yours Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.faithfullyMostafa.faithfullyMostafa!faithfullyMostafa?faithfullyMostafa:faithfullyMostafa,faithfullyMostafa;
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