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For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this give details of how you have benefited from the club explain why you want to leave

Dear Sir, My name is Viral Korat, and I am one of your loyal members of the club name Royal club. I am writing this letter to apprise you about not to renewing your club membership from the next year. Your club is one the finest in the city, and I am an executive member of that club. Two years ago, when your club opened, I got the executive membership. I had always paid my fees in advance, sometime with my credit card or with check. As part of membership, it had been benefited in various ways. Every time when I tried to book for holidays, I got the discount on flight tickets and hotel bookings. In addition, the indoor and outdoor games facilities in your premises is the best in town. Every Sunday, I go there, and play Table tennis, Badminton, and outdoor Cricket match with my friends. I no longer wish to continue the membership, as I am moving to Canada for my higher studies with my family. Look forward to hearing from you soon! Yours faithfully, Viral Korat
Dear Sir,

My name is Viral
Korat
, and I am one of your loyal members of the
club
name Royal
club
. I am writing this letter to apprise you about not to renewing your
club
membership
from the
next
year.

Your
club
is
one
the finest in the city, and I am an executive member of that
club
. Two years ago, when your
club
opened, I
got
the executive
membership
. I had always paid my fees in advance, sometime with my credit card or with
check
.

As part of
membership
, it had
been benefited
in various ways. Every time when I tried to book for holidays, I
got
the discount on flight tickets and hotel bookings.
In addition
, the indoor and outdoor games facilities in your premises is the best in town. Every Sunday, I go there, and play Table tennis, Badminton, and outdoor Cricket match with my friends.

I no longer wish to continue the
membership
, as I am moving to Canada for my higher studies with my family.

Look forward to hearing from you
soon
!

Yours
faithfully
,

Viral
Korat
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IELTS letter For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this give details of how you have benefited from the club explain why you want to leave

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6.0
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