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A museum is looking for poeple to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. Write a letter to applay for tha job

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to postule for the part-time voluntary/umpaid job at the "Great Day" museum. My name is Henery Klarck, I am 22 years old and I am in my last year at the university. I study history and I live next to the museum; Hence, this task fits for me. The fact that I am studying U. S history, working in this great place will be very beneficial for my training period. As for my skills, I want to inform you that I speak three laguages: English, French and German. As a result, I can work as a guide. I can, also, be useful a an accountant; because I have studied economy for two years. I will be available next August; Thus, I will finish my latest exam at 17 July. I hope you to accept my request. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Henery

Dear Sir or Madam,

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 job at the Use a smart opening quote here.“
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 museum.

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 beneficial for my training period.

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skills
, I want to inform you that I speak three Possible spelling mistake found.languages
laguages
: English, French and German. As a result
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 accountant; This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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 I have studied economy for two years.

I will be available next
 August; Thus
, I will finish my latest exam at 17 July.

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 hope you to accept my request.

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I
 am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
,

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Henery