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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Sir John, I am writing this letter to inform you that I cannot carry on with the course in your institute. Previously, I was working as a graphic designer in a multinational company. Recently, I got promotion in my job because of my hard work and efforts now I am head of designing department. My senior give me an opportunity and responsibility of the biggest project of our company with a deadline. To complete the target on time I have to engage my whole day in my work due to which unfortunately I will not be able to continue with the course. The way you teach English literature is remarkable but the project requires my attention and obviously, extra sitting in the office. Along with my native language, English is one of the foreign language which I like to learn. I was in dilemma weather how to manage my study and work. I was muddled, but now I came to a conclusion that I should pause my course. I would like you to hold my course for some time I assure you I will resume my course as soon as I am done with this project. Yours sincerely,
Dear Sir John, I am writing this letter to inform you that I cannot carry on with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in your institute.

Previously, I was working as a graphic designer in a multinational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. Recently, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
promotion in my job
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work and efforts
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I am head of designing department.

My senior give me an opportunity and responsibility of the biggest project of our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
with a deadline. To complete the target on time I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
engage my whole day in my work due to which unfortunately I will not be able to continue with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. The way you teach English literature is
Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
remarkable
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the project requires my attention and
obviously
, extra sitting in the office.

Along with my native language, English is one of the foreign language which I like to learn. I was in dilemma weather how to manage my study and work. I
was muddled
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I came to a conclusion that I should pause my course.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like you to hold my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time I assure you I will resume my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as I
am done
with this project. Yours
sincerely
,

IELTS letter You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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