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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Sir John, I am writing this letter to inform you that I cannot carry on with the course in your institute. Previously, I was working as a graphic designer in a multinational company. Recently, I got promotion in my job because of my hard work and efforts now I am head of designing department. My senior give me an opportunity and responsibility of the biggest project of our company with a deadline. To complete the target on time I have to engage my whole day in my work due to which unfortunately I will not be able to continue with the course. The way you teach English literature is remarkable but the project requires my attention and obviously, extra sitting in the office. Along with my native language, English is one of the foreign language which I like to learn. I was in dilemma weather how to manage my study and work. I was muddled, but now I came to a conclusion that I should pause my course. I would like you to hold my course for some time I assure you I will resume my course as soon as I am done with this project. Yours sincerely,

Dear Sir John, I am writing this letter to inform you that I cannot carry on with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 in your institute.

Previously, I was working as a graphic designer in a multinational This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Recently, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 promotion in my job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work and efforts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am head of designing department.

My senior give me an opportunity and responsibility of the biggest project of our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 with a deadline. To complete the target on time I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 engage my whole day in my work due to which unfortunately I will not be able to continue with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
. The way you teach English literature is Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).remarkable,
remarkable
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the project requires my attention and obviously
, extra sitting in the office.

Along with my native language, English is one of the foreign language which I like to learn. I was in dilemma weather how to manage my study and work. I was muddled
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I came to a conclusion that I should pause my course.

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I
 would like you to hold my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time I assure you I will resume my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as I am done
 with this project. Yours sincerely
, 