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You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter. MAap
Dear Sir/Madam, I am the customer of the bank holding a current account with the account number "A2356464". I am writing to complain about not receiving my checkbook which was requested 14 days before. As the account is mainly used for business transactions, often cheques are needed to be issued. Since there were only 4 leaflets remaining, I approached the bank for the issuance of a new booklet. The bank policy states the checkbook should be requested one week in advance and accordingly I had actioned on it. Can you explain why it is taking so much time and how much more do I have to wait? It has been more than a fortnight since the request was made but till now I have not received the booklet. I had personally visited the Ford branch to make the request, because there was no update I repeated the visit but there is no proper update given. I need the cheques for my business transactions and would like to know the latest time they can be made available. A proper investigation in this matter needs to be done, and kindly update me with the actions taken for the same so it is not repeated in the future. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Uzair
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am the customer of the bank holding a
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current
account with the account number
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A2356464
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. I am writing to complain about not receiving my checkbook which
was requested
14 days
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before
.

As the account is
mainly
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used
for business transactions,
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often
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cheques
are needed
to
be issued
. Since there were
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only
4 leaflets remaining, I approached the bank for the issuance of a new booklet. The bank policy states the checkbook should
be requested
one week in advance and
accordingly
I had actioned on it. Can you
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explain
why it is taking
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so
much time and how much more do I
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have to
wait?

It has been more than a fortnight since the request
was made
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but
till
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now
I have not received the booklet. I had
personally
visited the Ford branch to
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make
the request,
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because
there was no update I repeated the visit
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but
there is no proper update
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given
.

I need the
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheques' is British English.
cheques
for my business transactions and would like to know the latest time they can
be made
available. A proper investigation in this matter needs to
be done
, and kindly update me with the actions taken for the same
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it is not repeated in the future. I look forward to your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Uzair
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IELTS letter You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

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