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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. v.1

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. v. 1 WPd0
Hi Ankit, I hope you are doing well. How are things in Japan? I think its spring there during this time of the year with cherry blossoms blooming all around. Its summer here and the afternoons get quite sultry and humid, while the evenings are pleasant. I have written to let you know about a job opportunity in a small startup for the post of Full Stack Developer. The name of the organization is ABC Solutions Ltd. The company deals in creating payment gateway solutions. Though the organization is quite new and therefore, not very famous, the role looks promising. You will get to learn a lot about new emerging technologies. Although I am not aware of the compensation details, I think the company will pay you handsomely for this role as they have recently picked up an enormous funding from some investors. Let me know if you have any more questions about this role, and I would be happy to address your queries. You will also be able to find more information about the company through an online search. Let me know if you are interested in pursuing this opportunity. I can't wait to hear back from you. Your friend, Somya
Hi Ankit,

I hope you are doing well. How are things in Japan? I
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think
its spring there during this time of the year with cherry blossoms blooming all around. Its summer here and the afternoons
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quite sultry and humid, while the evenings are pleasant.

I have written to
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let
you know about a job opportunity in a
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small
startup for the post of Full Stack Developer. The name of the organization is ABC Solutions Ltd. The
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company
deals in creating payment gateway solutions. Though the organization is quite new and
therefore
, not
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very
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famous
, the role looks promising. You will
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get
to learn a lot about new emerging technologies. Although I am not aware of the compensation
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details
, I
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think
the
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company
will pay you
handsomely
for this role as they have recently picked up an enormous funding from
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some
investors.
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Let
me know if you have any more questions about this role, and I would be happy to address your queries. You will
also
be able to find more information about the
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company
through an online search.
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Let
me know if you
are interested
in pursuing this opportunity.

I can't wait to hear back from you.

Your friend,

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Somya
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IELTS letter A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. v. 1

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201 words
6.5
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