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Business email to the manager

Business email to the manager ykwd

I hope you are doing fine. For almost one or two weeks I have not written anything to you. Every time I wanted to apologize for this manner, however this time I am not going to apologize. Because I am stuck due to hard work. There is a project in my company, and I had to work on Saturday. Would you believe that? Weekends are for employees to have a rest. But our boss said that it was temporary and we had to meet the deadline. Deadline is the date that we have to complete all of the statements of the company which we audit. Beyond this, I want to talk about other stuff. I am doing some other productive things as well. Like I am trying to work on my finance skills right now. The way I see things in finance can be much more interesting than an audit. This is why I would like to continue my career in the finance field. To do that, I have found a bunch of courses on LinkedIn for free. It is a kind of specialization and consists of 17 different courses. I almost finished most of them. It is not only related to financing but also Excel. That is why it is so useful for me to finish that specialization.

I hope you are doing fine. For almost one or two weeks I have not written anything to you. Every time I wanted to apologize for this manner, however
 this time I am not going to apologize. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 I am stuck
 due to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work. There is a project in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, and I had to work on Saturday. Would you believe that? Weekends are for employees to have a rest. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 our boss said that it was Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).temporary, and
temporary and
 we had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 the deadline. Deadline is the date that we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 complete Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 statements of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 which we audit.

Beyond this, I want to talk about other stuff. I am doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other productive things as well
. Like I am trying to work on my finance This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. The way I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 things in finance can be much more interesting than an audit. This is why I would like to continue my career in the finance field. To do that, I have found a bunch of courses on LinkedIn for free. It is a kind of specialization and consists of 17 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 courses. I almost finished most of them. It is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 related to financing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 Excel. That is
 why it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 useful for me to finish that specialization. 