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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take eVoO
Dear Neighbours, I'm writing this letter because some of you complained about the noises and I should say that I'm really embarrassed and sorry about it. As some of you may know, me and my wife recently adopt a baby. We're at the beginnig of this road and amatures, so sometimes things get out of our hands but I assure you that we're working on it. I must say again on behalf of all of us that we're really sorry and I hope you can tolerate us more. About the noises I commit myself that I should explain more; the baby has some problem with health, he's got a tumor in his stomach and it stops her from eating and as she goes hungry she starts crying. We've been taken her to the doctors and they're gonna do a surgery on her and they've promised that she'll be fine. So I appericate if you give us some time to deal with this issue. Thank you, Your Neighbour Farshid
Dear
Neighbours
,

I'm writing this letter
because
some
of you complained about the noises and I should say that I'm
really
embarrassed and sorry about it.

As
some
of you may know, me and my wife recently adopt a baby. We're at the
beginnig
of this road and
amatures
,
so
sometimes
things
get
out of our hands
but
I assure you that we're working on it.

I
must
say again on behalf of all of us that we're
really
sorry and I hope you can tolerate us more.

About the noises I commit myself that I should
explain
more; the baby has
some
problem with health, he's
got
a tumor in his stomach and it
stops
her from eating and as she goes hungry she
starts
crying. We've
been taken
her to the
doctors and
they're
gonna
do a surgery on
her and
they've promised that she'll be fine.

So
I
appericate
if you give us
some
time to deal with this issue.

Thank you,

Your
Neighbour
Farshid
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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