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Business email to the manager

Business email to the manager ODQk
I hope you are doing fine. For almost one or two weeks I have not written anything to you. Every time I wanted to apologize for this manner, however this time I am not going to apologize. Because I am stuck due to hard work. There is a project in my company, and I had to work on Saturday. Would you believe that? Weekends are for employees to have a rest. But our boss said that it was temporary and we had to meet the deadline. Deadline is the date that we have to complete all of the statements of the company which we audit. Beyond this, I want to talk about other stuff. I am doing some other productive things as well. Like I am trying to work on my finance skills right now. The way I see things in finance can be much more interesting than an audit. This is why I would like to continue my career in the finance field. To do that, I have found a bunch of courses on LinkedIn for free. It is a kind of specialization and consists of 17 different courses. I almost finished most of them. It is not only related to financing but also Excel. That is why it is so useful for me to finish that specialization. Additionally, I have finished my application process at UGRAD. Of course, you know about it, however, I am going to mention something about UGRAD Scholarship. Let us think of an organization that helps students around the world who are willing to get a decent education in the United States for free. It chooses students who do not have a good chance to get a better education in their own countries such as Azerbaijan. Even though I do not have a chance to go to the U. S. Because there was a requirement which asked me ‘Will you remain at least one semester after May 2022? ’ as well as guess what? I will graduate from university in May 2022. That is the reason why I am a little bit upset. But I did not give up and finish the application process. After this, since I am chosen, there will be an interview. And hope it will. Finally, I want to move on to some problems in the company that I work at. There are a bunch of problems which I want to mention. One of them is their opinions about me in the evaluation process. There is an Audit Director who said that he did not like my style. Wtf? Because I wear how they want. This is just a cause for not promoting me. Because there were some other interns as well. However honestly speaking, there was a requirement that we had to work at least 400 hours during 3 months as well as I had worked for only 197 hours which was not okay for being an Audit Associate 1. It was because mainly, I did not have enough chances to work due to my university exams. But I am ok now, I will be an Audit Associate 1 at the end of this month. I do not care about this. Yeah, that is it for today. I was not planning to write something at this time. But we lost our internet connection, I cannot use it now. Also, I did have a quiz on Financial Reporting and Analysis. Due to losing the internet, I would not be able to attend the class. Hope it will be fine for me. Thanks for taking into consideration my writing. See you next time.
I hope you are doing fine. For almost one or two weeks I have not written anything to you. Every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
I wanted to apologize for this manner,
however
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
I am not going to apologize.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
I
am stuck
due to
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hard
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work
. There is a project in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, and I had to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
on Saturday. Would you believe that? Weekends are for employees to have a rest.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
our boss said that it was
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
temporary and
we had to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the deadline. Deadline is the date that we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
complete
Consider using "all the".
all of the
statements of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
which we audit.

Beyond this, I
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want
to talk about other stuff. I am doing
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some
other productive things as
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well
. Like I am trying to
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work
on my finance
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skills
right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
. The way I
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see
things in finance can be much more interesting than an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
audit
. This is why I would like to continue my career in the finance field. To do that, I have found a bunch of courses on LinkedIn for free. It is a kind of specialization and consists of 17
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
courses. I almost finished most of them. It is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
related to financing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
Excel.
That is
why it is
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so
useful for me to finish that specialization.

Additionally
, I have finished my application process at
Possible spelling mistake found.
UGRAD
.
Of course
, you know about it,
however
, I am going to mention something about
Possible spelling mistake found.
UGRAD
Scholarship.
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Let
us
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
of an organization that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
students around the world who are willing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a decent education in the United States for free. It chooses students who do not have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
chance to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a better education in their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
countries such as Azerbaijan.
Even though
I do not have a chance to go to the U. S.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
there was a requirement which asked me ‘Will you remain at least one semester after May 2022? ’ as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
as guess what? I will graduate from university in May 2022.
That is
the reason why I am a
Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".
little bit
upset.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I did not give up and finish the application process. After this, since I
am chosen
, there will be an interview. And hope it will.

Finally
, I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
on to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
problems in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
that I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
at. There are a bunch of problems which I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to mention. One of them is their opinions about me in the evaluation process. There is an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Audit
Director who said that he did not like my style.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Wtf
?
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
I wear how they
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want
. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a cause for not promoting me.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
there were
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some
other interns as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
honestly
speaking, there was a requirement that we had to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
at least 400 hours during 3 months as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
as I had worked for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
197 hours which was not okay for being an
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Audit
Associate 1. It was
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because
mainly
, I did not have
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enough
chances to
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work
due to my university exams.
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But
I am ok
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now
, I will be an
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Audit
Associate 1 at the
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end
of this month. I do not care about this.

Yeah,
that is
it for
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today
. I was not planning to write something at this
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time
.
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But
we lost our internet connection, I cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.
Also
, I did have a quiz on Financial Reporting and Analysis. Due to losing the internet, I would not be able to attend the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
. Hope it will be fine for me. Thanks for taking into consideration my writing.
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See
you
next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
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IELTS letter Business email to the manager

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
602 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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