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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. NaGj
Dear Mr. Shah, I am writing to inform you that I will not be able to continue the art and design course at a later date. I have recently started working as a full time data scientist at Inspire private limited. I have been juggling my work in the morning and part-time course in the evening but now it has been very difficult for me to balance both the things. Recently, I have been informed by my colleagues that I will be leading an important project for my company and I will have to devote and focus to achieve the goal in the desired time period. Justifying both the task and providing them with adequate time will be next to impossible for me. This has forced me to continue the course after I complete my task. I hope that you will understand my situation. I am extremely keen and want to complete this course with flying colours. If possible, I wish to continue this course after 2 months. I am extremely sorry for the inconvienence. Yours sincerely Raghav Modi
Dear Mr. Shah,

I am writing to inform you that I will not be able to continue the art and design
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
at a later date. I have recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
working as a full time data scientist at Inspire private limited.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have been juggling my work in the morning and part-time
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course
in the evening
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but
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now
it has been
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult for me to balance both the things.

Recently, I have
been informed
by my colleagues that I will be leading an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
project for my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and I will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
devote and focus to achieve the goal in the desired time period. Justifying both the task and providing them with adequate time will be
next
to impossible for me. This has forced me to continue the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
after I complete my task.

I hope that you will understand my situation. I am
extremely
keen and want to complete this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
with flying
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colours
. If possible, I wish to continue this
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course
after 2 months.

I am
extremely
sorry for the
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inconvienence
.

Yours
sincerely


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Raghav
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Modi

IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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