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Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life

Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life 0goO
Dear Mr Sinha, Hope this letter finds you in high spirits and good health. I just got the intimation of your ensuing retirement from the scholl Alumni forum newsletter. Still today, 20 years after leaving the secondary school, I found inspriation in the systematic and organized way you helped us complete the Maths and Physics courses for our secondary examination. I including most of my classmates are amazed by your skill of depicting the most complex and difficult problems with a systematic and easy approach. As a direct result of the above mentoined inspiration and curiousity that you had planted in us - I was able to take mathemitcs as my additional subhect in my higher secondary and was able to score high marks. Not only the school level and future college level courses, even after joning professional service, I have contnitued to follow your advice and problem solving tactics and found them immensely helpful in current scenario too. I wanted to wish best of luck for your retirement and I am sure you will now be able to find time to follow your passion in days to come. look forward to hear about your oncoming post-retirement projects form the Alumni newsletter. Yours sincerely, Arindam Das
Dear Mr
Sinha
,

Hope this letter finds you in high spirits and
good
health. I
just
got
the intimation of your ensuing retirement from the
scholl
Alumni forum newsletter.

Still
today
, 20 years after leaving the secondary school, I found
inspriation
in the systematic and organized way you
helped
us complete the
Maths
and Physics courses for our secondary examination.
I including
most of my classmates
are amazed
by your
skill
of depicting the most complex and difficult problems with a systematic and easy approach.

As a direct result of the above
mentoined
inspiration and
curiousity
that you had planted in us
-
I was able to take
mathemitcs
as my additional
subhect
in my higher secondary and was able to score high marks. Not
only
the school level and future college level courses, even after
joning
professional service, I have
contnitued
to follow your advice and problem solving tactics and found them
immensely
helpful in
current
scenario too.

I wanted to wish best of luck for your
retirement and
I am sure you will
now
be able to find time to follow your passion in days to
come
.
look
forward
to hear
about your oncoming post-retirement projects form the Alumni newsletter.

Yours
sincerely
,

Arindam
Das
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life

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205 words
6.0
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