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You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter. EJ5D
Dear Sir or Madam, My reason for writing concerns my request which I placed two weeks ago, for a new cheque book. I placed the order at my main branch on Park Street road. I have been waiting for a long time and I also tried contacting the branch but no suitable response was provided. Would you please let me know how long do I need to wait to receive it and any further steps I need to take. Also please let me know what steps can be taken from your side to get it delivered to me as soon as possible. I would appreciate your prompt action for my request. Thank you in advance for your attention to this matter Yours faithfully, Neha Reddy
Dear Sir or Madam, My reason for writing concerns my request which I placed two weeks ago, for a new
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cheque
book. I placed the order at my main branch on Park Street road. I have been waiting for a long time and I
also
tried contacting the branch
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no suitable response
was provided
. Would you
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please
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let
me know how long do I need to wait to receive it and any
further
steps I need to take.
Also
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please
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let
me know what steps can
be taken
from your side to
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get
it delivered to me as
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soon
as possible. I would appreciate your prompt action for my request. Thank you in advance for your attention to this
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Yours
faithfully
,
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Neha
Reddy

IELTS letter You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

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