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You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. Describe your purchase order of the book. Explain the importance of the book. Say what you what the company to do for you

You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. Describe your purchase order of the book. Explain the importance of the book. Say what you what the company to do for you Y1QQ
Dear Sir, I would like to draw your attention towards non-delivery of order no: 123456789 dated 4th April 2019 through online mode. I understand your company policy for delivery of product within 15 working day. Firstly, please consider the vitality of my order. It contains my CFA level II question bank together with Texas BA II calculation. CFA level II exam are scheduled on coming 17th June. Question bank ordered contains over 10000 question, which necessitates a second round of revision ahead of appearing for exam. Moreover, Texas BA II calculator is a special purpose financial calculator and one of mandatory requirements of CFA exam. We need to practice a quite a long practice to manage enough familiarity with it. I am left with less than a month time to prepare for exams. Considering the significance of contents of order, I request you to send it through airmail, which requires two day delivery time. Additional charges levied for airmail mode of delivery can be added to my invoice and will be paid upon delivery. I shall be highly thankful for your support to arrange the necessary. Yours’ sincerely Gurmeet Singh
Dear Sir,

I would like to draw your attention towards non-delivery of order no: 123456789 dated 4th April 2019 through online mode. I understand your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
policy for delivery of product within 15 working day.

Firstly
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
consider the vitality of my order. It contains my CFA level II question bank together with Texas BA II calculation. CFA level II exam
are scheduled
on coming 17th June. Question bank ordered contains over 10000 question, which necessitates a second round of revision ahead of appearing for exam.

Moreover
, Texas BA II calculator is a special purpose financial calculator and one of mandatory requirements of CFA exam. We need to practice a quite a long practice to manage
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enough
familiarity with it. I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
with less than a month time to prepare for exams.

Considering the significance of contents of order, I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
it through airmail, which requires
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "two-day"
two day
delivery time. Additional charges levied for airmail mode of delivery can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
to my invoice and will
be paid
upon delivery.

I shall be
highly
thankful for your support to arrange the necessary.

An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: "Yours"?
Yours’
sincerely


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IELTS letter You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. Describe your purchase order of the book. Explain the importance of the book. Say what you what the company to do for you

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189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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