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You bought a new HD television last week. At first it seemed to work perfectly but after a few hours a line appeared across the TV and the sound seemed a little strange. You cannot take the TV back to the shop so you decide to write to them. Write a letter of complaint to the shop. In your letter give them the background information describe the problem ask them to resolve the issue

You bought a new HD television last week. At first it seemed to work perfectly but after a few hours a line appeared across the TV and the sound seemed a little strange. You cannot take the TV back to the shop so you decide to write to them. Write a letter of complaint to the shop. In your letter give them the background information describe the problem ask them to resolve the issue GR3m

Dear Sir, I am writing to you with respect to multiple problems, appeared suddenly - in a few hours of usage, in your “Sony 65 inches 4K Full HD LED” television which I bought from your shop, located at Emporium Mall Lahore, last weekend – February 19, 2020. Surprisingly, a bold line has started to appear on the left side of the screen from top to bottom which splits the display in two portions. Moreover, one of the speakers is not working either and the pitch of the volume has decreased significantly. Realistically, it is extremely shocking for me that a shop of your stature is providing such substandard products. Now, you are rerquested to replace this TV with the new one on immediate basis owing to the fact that it is under 3 years of replacement warranty and you are expected to pick the old one and drop the new TV from my home without charging me any kind of delivery fee. Looking forward to your usual cooperation in the matter on priority. Yours' sincerely, Fahad

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you with respect to multiple problems, appeared suddenly
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 in a few hours of usage, in your “Sony Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.65 inches (1.65 m)65 inches (1.65 meters)65 inches (ca. 165 cm)65 inches (165.1 cm)65 inches (ca. 165 centimeters)65 inches (165.1 centimeters)
65 inches
 4K Full HD LED” television which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your shop, located at Emporium Mall Lahore, last weekend Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 February 19, 2020.

Surprisingly
, a bold line has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to appear on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the screen from top to bottom which splits the display in two portions. Moreover
, one of the speakers is not working either and the pitch of the volume has decreased significantly
. Realistically
, it is extremely
 shocking for me that a shop of your stature is providing such substandard products.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, you are Possible spelling mistake found.requested
rerquested
 to replace this TV with the new one on immediate basis owing to the fact that it is under 3 years of replacement warranty and you are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to pick the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 one and drop the new TV from my home without charging me any kind of delivery fee.

Looking forward to your usual cooperation in the matter on priority.

An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: "Yours"?Yours
Yours'
sincerely
,

Fahad