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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter say why he/she would not enjoy going to college, explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her, suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter say why he/she would not enjoy going to college, explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her, suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her 78py
Dear Abhishek, I have received your letter yesterday and I am glad to know that you have completed your basic education. Also, I thank you for taking me into confidence in order to consult about your dilemma regarding either going for further studies or start working. As I know you personally, your introvert nature will hinder you from pursuing higher education in a completely new environment. So, I would suggest you to drop your plans in this direction for the time being. Other than this, I got to know that your elder brother is finding difficulties in getting job offers. Therefore, in order to fulfill the basic necessities, I would rather suggest you to become self-reliant and start earning. Looking at your excellent grip over typing skilI, I would advice you to start capitalizing and be a bread-winner for your family in this tough times. If I come across any suitable jobs where you can work remotely, I will definitely inform you. Meanwhile, you can also search for jobs related to data-entry or content-writing in the 'Hiring' section of local newspaper. Do convey my best regards to your brother. Yours affectionately, Aditya Madan
Dear Abhishek,

I have received your letter
yesterday and
I am glad to know that you have completed your basic education.
Also
, I thank you for taking me into confidence in order to consult about your dilemma regarding either going for
further
studies or
start
working.

As I know you
personally
, your introvert nature will hinder you from pursuing higher education in a completely new environment.
So
, I would suggest you to drop your plans in this direction for the time being.

Other than this, I
got
to know that your elder brother is finding difficulties in getting job offers.
Therefore
, in order to fulfill the
basic necessities
, I would
rather
suggest you to become self-reliant and
start
earning.

Looking at your excellent grip over typing
skilI
, I would
advice
you to
start
capitalizing and be a bread-winner for your family in this tough times. If I
come
across any suitable jobs where you can work
remotely
, I will definitely inform you. Meanwhile, you can
also
search for jobs related to data-entry or content-writing in the 'Hiring' section of local

newspaper.

Do convey my best regards to your brother.

Yours
affectionately
,

Aditya
Madan
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IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter say why he/she would not enjoy going to college, explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her, suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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