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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you N93m
You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you Dear Vivek, Hope you have reached home safely. This was one of the best ever trip of my life and a big thanks to you for those amazing days in Singapore. My flight reached at 3: 00pm and when I entered home, I got to know that my wallet left at your place. Firstly, let me thank you for your countless efforts in order to made my parents agree for the one full week that was near to impossible. Moreover, the skydiving was breathtaking but your support helped me to embrace that unforgettable lifetime experience. I did not know that you have planned each day pretty well alone. As a warming gesture I have bought a watch for you that I have hide in the drawer of your dressing table. At the same time I forgot to pick my wallet from the same table wile hiding your surprise gift. My wallet is of parada brand which is of black color but very less cash inside. However, the only trouble is that all of my debit and credit cards are there in the wallet along with my driving license. Although, I know it is tough for you to get some time to courier my wallet at my place but it is crucial to drive with the driving license. Please arrange some time and post my wallet at my home address which is 109, second floor, india enclave sector 51b chandigarh and pin code is 160047. Look forward to meet you soon and much love to you. Yours truly, Sonam Mahajan
You have
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spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you
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got
home, you
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realised
you had
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left
your
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wallet
there.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

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thank your friend for the holiday

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explain
that you
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left
your
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wallet
in their
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house


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give them instructions of how to
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send
it back to you

Dear Vivek,

Hope you have reached home
safely
. This was one of the best ever trip of my life and a
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big
thanks to you for those amazing days in Singapore. My flight reached at 3: 00pm and when I entered home, I
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got
to know that my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
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left
at your place.

Firstly
,
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let
me thank you for your countless efforts in order to
Did you mean "make"?
made
my parents
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agree
for the one full week that was near
Did you mean "too"?
to
impossible.
Moreover
, the skydiving was breathtaking
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but
your support
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helped
me to embrace that unforgettable lifetime experience. I did not know that you have planned each day pretty well alone.

As a warming gesture I have
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bought
a
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watch
for you that I have
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hide
in the drawer of your dressing table. At the same time I forgot to pick my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
from the same table wile hiding your surprise gift. My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
is of
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parada
brand which is of black color
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but
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very
less cash inside.

However
, the
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only
trouble is that all of my debit and credit cards are there in the
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wallet
along with my driving license. Although, I know it is tough for you to
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get
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some
time to courier my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
at my place
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but
it is crucial to drive with the driving license.
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Please
arrange
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some
time and post my
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wallet
at my home address which is 109, second floor,
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india
enclave sector 51b
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chandigarh
and pin code is 160047.

Look forward to
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meet
you
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soon
and much
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love
to you.

Yours
truly
,

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Sonam
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Mahajan
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IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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  American English
11 paragraphs
319 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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