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Dear John, I am writing this letter to request some unpaid leaves next month My parents 25th wedding anniversary is on 21st March and they are planning to celebrate this significant achievement with all their children and grandchildren. To do this, they rented big house enough to accommodate whole family. To participate in this special occasion, I would need to be away from work for four days from Monday 19th to Thursday 23rd March. My schedule for that week is relatively light, apart from two meetings with clients. Neeta would be able to attain in my place, as she has had previous dealings with both companies and knows the relevant staff there. I have no other urgent work commitments at that time. I would be very greatful if you could allow me this time. This few days are very important to my parents and the whole family and it would be way to thank them for all the supports they have given me. All the best.

Dear John, I am writing this letter to request This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 unpaid This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
next
 month My parents 25th wedding anniversary is on 21st Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).March, and
March and
 they are planning to celebrate this significant achievement with all their children and grandchildren. To do this, they rented This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to accommodate whole family. To participate in this special occasion, I would need to be away from work for four days from Monday 19th to Thursday 23rd March. My schedule for that week is relatively
 light, apart from two meetings with clients. Possible spelling mistake found.Ne etaNee ta
Neeta
 would be able to attain in my place, as she has had previous dealings with both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 and knows the relevant staff there. I have no other urgent work commitments at that time. I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Possible spelling mistake found.gratefuldreadfulrestfulfretful
greatful
 if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me this time. This few days are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to my parents and the whole family and it would be way to thank them for all the supports they have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 me. All the best. 