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letter to work part time in a museum

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my interest to work part time in your museum. Any museum is a great source of information. It not only helps in relating the various facts but also provides proof which can be seen in real. I had been always fasinated by museums. It is my desire to work in a museum so I can pay back to them in return to their contribution to the society. Being student of history, I can understand significance of various objects which are being displayed to the visitors. I can work as a tour guide to the visitors and can explain various interesting facts about manuments and artifacts. As mentioned above, I am pursuing my degree in history and it is being my last semester, I have to attend classes on weekdays. On weeekends, after completing my assignments, I would be free for almost 4-5 hours. So on every Saturday and Sunday, I can work in the afternoon. I hope it should serve the purpose. I look forward getting positive response from you. Yours faithfully, Anup Anjan
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest to
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work
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part time
in your museum.

Any museum is a great source of information. It not
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only
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helps
in relating the various facts
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but
also
provides proof which can be
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seen
in real. I had been always
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fasinated
by museums. It is my desire to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in a museum
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so
I can pay back to them in return to their contribution to the society.

Being student of history, I can understand significance of various objects which are
being displayed
to the visitors. I can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
as a tour guide to the visitors and can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
various interesting facts about
Possible spelling mistake found.
manuments
and artifacts.

As mentioned above, I am pursuing my degree in history and it is being my last semester, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
attend classes on weekdays. On
Possible spelling mistake found.
weeekends
, after completing my assignments, I would be free for almost 4-5 hours.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
on every Saturday and Sunday, I can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in the afternoon.

I hope it should serve the purpose. I look forward getting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Anup
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Anjan
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IELTS letter letter to work part time in a museum

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  American English
8 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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