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Letter of thanks to your friends with whom you spend holiday and explain why you not write earlier and invite them to visit you

Letter of thanks to your friends with whom you spend holiday and explain why you not write earlier and invite them to visit you jQrEX
Dear jone and Jenny, I 'm glad receiving your photos when we were in Singapore. The photos are so nice and bright. They remind me for my special holiday with you. I m sorry because I don't write a letter to you as soon as possible. After I came back to Melbourne, my boss asked me to had two weeks training in Wellington, Newzealand. I don't have any time to tell you because it happened suddenly. My company wants to changed the system of the computer into the online system. All of the staff must have training first, before the system running. I hope you can come and stay with me during next holiday. My address is xyz. You can contact me first if you have a plan to visit. Thanks for your kindness and i am looking forward for your reply. Yours sincerely, Tina
Dear
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jone
and Jenny, I 'm glad receiving your photos when we were in Singapore. The photos are
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so
nice and bright. They remind me for my special holiday with you.
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I m
sorry
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because
I don't write a letter to you as
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soon
as possible. After I came back to Melbourne, my boss asked me to
Did you mean "have"?
had
two weeks training in Wellington,
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Newzealand
. I don't have any time to
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tell
you
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because
it happened
suddenly
. My
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company
wants to
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changed
the system of the computer into the online system.
Consider using "all the".
All of the
staff
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must
have training
first
,
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before
the system running. I hope you can
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come
and stay with me during
next
holiday. My address is
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xyz
. You can contact me
first
if you have a plan to visit. Thanks for your kindness and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am looking forward for your reply. Yours
sincerely
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Tina
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IELTS letter Letter of thanks to your friends with whom you spend holiday and explain why you not write earlier and invite them to visit you

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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