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Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start. GW8A2
Dear Ms Barnes, I am writing concerning the position of Assistant Office Manager that I am due to begin next Monday. However, a problem has arisen. As you know, I currently work for my uncle's food-packing business, and you will remember from my interview that I have gained valuable experience there. Unfortunately, he has had to go into hospital for an operation, leaving my aunt in charge of both the home and the business. She has asked me, as this is a particularly busy time of year, to stay on and help her with the running of the office. I realise this will be inconvenient to you, but very much hope that, given the circumstances, you would be prepared to allow me to take up my position with you two weeks later than planned. I would like to emphasise that I remain very keen to work with you, and that I will be gaining further useful experience during this time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, John Forbes
Dear Ms Barnes,

I am writing concerning the position of Assistant Office Manager that I am due to
begin
next
Monday.
However
, a problem has arisen.

As you know, I
currently
work for my uncle's food-packing business, and you will remember from my interview that I have gained valuable experience there. Unfortunately, he has had to go into hospital for an operation, leaving my aunt in charge of both the home and the business. She has asked me, as this is a
particularly
busy time of year, to stay on and
help
her with the running of the office.

I
realise
this will be inconvenient to you,
but
very
much hope that,
given
the circumstances, you would
be prepared
to
allow
me to take up my position with you two weeks later than planned.

I would like to
emphasise
that I remain
very
keen to work with you, and that I will be gaining
further
useful experience during this time.

I
look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

John Forbes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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