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Letter regarding holidays photo. Thanks your friends for photo and holiday, explain why you don't write letters earlier and invite your friends.

Letter regarding holidays photo. Thanks your friends for photo and holiday, explain why you don't write letters earlier and invite your friends. e8d7x

Dear jone and Jenny, I 'm glad receiving your photos when we were in Singapore. The photos are so nice and bright. They remind me for my special holiday with you. I m sorry because I don't write a letter to you as soon as possible. After I came back to Melbourne, my boss asked me to had two weeks training in Wellington, Newzealand. I don't have any time to tell you because it happened suddenly. My company wants to changed the system of the computer into the online system. All of the staff must have training first, before the system running. I hope you can come and stay with me during next holiday. My address is xyz. You can contact me first if you have a plan to visit. Thanks for your kindness and i am looking forward for your reply. Yours sincerely, Tina

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.oneJunedonegonenonezone
jone
 and Jenny, I 'm glad receiving your photos when we were in Singapore. The photos are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 nice and bright. They remind me for my special holiday with you. It seems that an apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "I'm"?I'm
I m
 sorry This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I don't write a letter to you as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. After I came back to Melbourne, my boss asked me to Did you mean "have"?have
had
 two weeks training in Wellington, Possible spelling mistake found.ZealandNederland
Newzealand
. I don't have any time to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it happened suddenly
. My This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 wants to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 the system of the computer into the online system. Consider using "all the".All the
All of the
 staff This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 have training first
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the system running. I hope you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and stay with me during next
 holiday. My address is Possible spelling mistake found.XYZAYZCYZXYLYYZ
xyz
. You can contact me first
 if you have a plan to visit. Thanks for your kindness and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am looking forward for your reply. Yours sincerely
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Tina