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Complaint letter on dissatsfaction with bad hotel

Complaint letter on dissatsfaction with bad hotel V08Dw
Dear Sir /Madam I am writing to inform you about my strong didsatsfaction with the service in your hotel. After coming to the city center I was informed that your hotel was the best one in that time. Being tired hot weather I looked for camfortable and cool room with air conditioner. I settled in your hotel at night, the next morning I switched on the coller item, being aware of its problem immedetly I informed about it to the cervant. He did not have it repaired although I asked a few times in that day. Working in bad condition, surely effected my job quality too. As a result, the project I prepared was assessed to less score than I expected, in spite of my hard working. In addition, I booked comfort room with extra payment for not disturbing by anyone. But, I noticed that the stuff of the hotel was not only friendly each other but also a bit rude to hostess. Moreover, the food was testless and the service was too slow. What is more, the noice from the factory, situated behind the building kept me awake untill elleven P. M every evening. In short, living in your hotel I felt myself extremely uncomfortable and bad becose of the hotel's quality. I look forward to you will investigate my letter as soon as possible and take prompt action on the situation. I feel that I should be fully compensated for my great disappointment with your hotel, otherwise I will have to take legal action. Yourse faithfully Mr Adms
Dear Sir /Madam

I am writing to inform you about my strong
didsatsfaction
with the service in your hotel.

After
coming to the city center I
was informed
that your
hotel
was the best one in that time.
Being tired
hot weather I looked for
camfortable
and cool room with air conditioner. I settled in your
hotel
at night, the
next
morning I switched on the
coller
item, being aware of its problem
immedetly
I informed about it to the
cervant
. He did not have it repaired although I asked a few times in that day. Working in
bad
condition,
surely
effected my job quality too.
As a result
, the project I prepared
was assessed
to less score than I
expected
,
in spite of
my
hard working
.

In addition
, I booked comfort room with extra payment for not disturbing by anyone.
But
, I noticed that the stuff of the
hotel
was not
only
friendly each other
but
also
a bit rude to hostess.
Moreover
, the food was
testless
and the service was too slow.
What is more
, the
noice
from the factory, situated behind the building
kept
me awake
untill
elleven
P. M every evening. In short, living in your
hotel
I felt myself
extremely
uncomfortable and
bad
becose
of the hotel's quality.

I look forward to you will investigate my letter as
soon
as possible and take prompt action on the situation. I feel that I should be
fully
compensated for my great disappointment with your
hotel
,
otherwise
I will
have to
take legal action.

Yourse
faithfully
Mr
Adms
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IELTS letter Complaint letter on dissatsfaction with bad hotel

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
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