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You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. PVWX2
Dear John, Thank you for considering my application for the post-graduation study at your college. I am writing this letter to you to inform that I will not be able to attend the interview. I want to explain my position to you that I am working for an IT firm and I have an appointment scheduled there. It is an important meeting that I even cannot postpone it. Therefore I apologise that I would not be able to attend the interview on Friday at 12pm, however I would like to reschedule this appointment for the same day but at 4pm or on coming Monday at any time suits you. Also, I would appreciate if you could tell me the duration of the interview and is there will be any written test so I will prepare myself accordingly. I will wait for your reply. Yours sincerely, Smith
Dear John, Thank you for considering my application for the post-graduation study at your college. I am writing this letter to you to inform that I will not be able to attend the interview. I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
my position to you that I am working for an IT firm and I have an appointment scheduled there. It is an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
meeting that I even cannot postpone it.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Therefore
I
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
that I would not be able to attend the interview on Friday at 12pm,
however
I would like to reschedule this appointment for the same day
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
at 4pm or on coming Monday at any time suits you.
Also
, I would appreciate if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
me the duration of the interview and is there will be any written
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
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so
I will prepare myself
accordingly
.

I will wait for your reply.

Yours
sincerely
, Smith
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IELTS letter You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
145 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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