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You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday

You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday 5B9je
Dear Ms. Snyder, I am writing to request time off of work for a week. As you are aware, the last couple of months have been quite hectic due to the new software release planned this week. As a result, I feel heavily worn out and think I need to take some time off and recharge myself. I am planning to go to Iceland on a holiday for 1 week. Therefore, I request you to grant me leave of absence for 5 working days starting from Monday, the 23rd of October to Friday, the 28th of October. During this period, I am completely off the grid and hence will be unreachable. I understand that there might be few bugs and patches identified after tomorrow's release, for which I intend to stretch my time and resolve them before my travel. Furthermore, I ensured to warm up my team members on all the aspects so they are well prepared to mitigate any further issues that might arise. Thank you for understanding. Yours faithfully Hemanth
Dear Ms. Snyder,

I am writing to request time off of work for a week. As you are aware, the last couple of months have been quite hectic due to the new software release planned this week.
As a result
, I feel
heavily
worn out and
think
I need to take
some
time off and recharge myself.

I am planning to go to Iceland on a holiday for 1 week.
Therefore
, I request you to grant me
leave
of absence for 5 working days starting from Monday, the 23rd of October to Friday, the 28th of October. During this period, I am completely off the grid and
hence
will be unreachable.

I understand that there might be few bugs and patches identified after tomorrow's release, for which I intend to stretch my time and resolve them
before
my travel.
Furthermore
, I ensured to warm up my team members on all the aspects
so
they are
well prepared
to mitigate any
further
issues that might arise.

Thank you for understanding.

Yours
faithfully


Hemanth
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IELTS letter You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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