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Writing letter to museum director for voluntary work

Writing letter to museum director for voluntary work 7POlY
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter in response to your requirement of unpaid voluntary work in the museum and would like to sign-up for this pleasant opportunity. This work will allow me not only to learn more about the museum and history but also help me gain credits for ongoing history project in the university. I have been on look-out for such a practical learning experience and looks perfect fit for me. Although I am sure that my accounting skills can be helpful but alongside competent knowledge of historical events would certainly be beneficial for leading guided tours. Moreover I have little experience of working as part time tourist guide which may add value. Since I have my university classes up to 4 PM, I would be available between 5 PM to 7 PM on Tuesday through Thursday and would be glad to join immediately. Looking forward for your positive response. Yours Faithfully Sasha
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter in response to your requirement of unpaid voluntary work in the museum and would like to
sign
-up for this pleasant opportunity.

This work will
allow
me not
only
to learn more about the museum and history
but
also
help
me gain credits for ongoing history project in the university. I have been on look-out for such a practical learning experience and looks perfect fit for me.

Although I am sure that my accounting
skills
can be helpful
but
alongside competent knowledge of historical
events
would
certainly
be beneficial for leading guided tours.
Moreover
I have
little
experience of working as
part time
tourist guide which may
add
value.

Since I have my university classes up to 4 PM, I would be available between 5 PM to 7 PM on Tuesday through Thursday and would be glad to
join
immediately.

Looking forward for your
positive
response.

Yours
Faithfully


Sasha
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IELTS letter Writing letter to museum director for voluntary work

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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