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You have recently bought a tv and it arrived damaged write a letter to the store manager

You have recently bought a tv and it arrived damaged write a letter to the store manager aQOrd
Dear Mr. Sharma, I am writing this letter to about a complaint Television set. Last week, I was visited your store and ordered the tv 25 August 2019. The store is sonny centre in jalandhar. The television is brand sonny black colour 32". Today I got a television. Suddenly, today I opened the box when I saw the tv left side below scratches. Moreover, the sound quality also not well. Furthermore, the volume button also not working. Everytime we are use a remote for volume and change the chanel. Overall, I am totally disappointed about it. I want to replace it as soon as possible please or if can't then return my money. I give aa full payment by cheque. I am regular customer your store so please solve this issue. I looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Karmjeet kaur.
Dear Mr. Sharma,

I am writing this letter to about a complaint Television set. Last week, I
was visited
your store and ordered the
tv
25 August 2019. The store is sonny
centre
in
jalandhar
. The television is brand sonny black
colour
32".
Today
I
got
a television.

Suddenly
,
today
I opened the box when I
saw
the
tv
left
side below scratches.
Moreover
, the sound quality
also
not well.
Furthermore
, the volume button
also
not working.
Everytime
we are
use
a remote for volume and
change
the
chanel
.
Overall
, I am
totally
disappointed about it.

I want to replace it as
soon
as possible
please
or if can't then return my money. I give
aa
full payment by
cheque
.
I
am regular
customer your store
so
please
solve this issue.

I
looking forward to your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Karmjeet
kaur
.
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IELTS letter You have recently bought a tv and it arrived damaged write a letter to the store manager

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  American English
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