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You have recently bought a tv and it arrived damaged write a letter to the store manager

You have recently bought a tv and it arrived damaged write a letter to the store manager aQOrd
Dear Mr. Sharma, I am writing this letter to about a complaint Television set. Last week, I was visited your store and ordered the tv 25 August 2019. The store is sonny centre in jalandhar. The television is brand sonny black colour 32". Today I got a television. Suddenly, today I opened the box when I saw the tv left side below scratches. Moreover, the sound quality also not well. Furthermore, the volume button also not working. Everytime we are use a remote for volume and change the chanel. Overall, I am totally disappointed about it. I want to replace it as soon as possible please or if can't then return my money. I give aa full payment by cheque. I am regular customer your store so please solve this issue. I looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Karmjeet kaur.
Dear Mr. Sharma,

I am writing this letter to about a complaint Television set. Last week, I
was visited
your store and ordered the
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tv
25 August 2019. The store is sonny
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centre
in
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jalandhar
. The television is brand sonny black
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colour
32".
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Today
I
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got
a television.

Suddenly
,
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today
I opened the box when I
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saw
the
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tv
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left
side below scratches.
Moreover
, the sound quality
also
not well.
Furthermore
, the volume button
also
not working.
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Everytime
we are
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use
a remote for volume and
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change
the
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chanel
.
Overall
, I am
totally
disappointed about it.

I want to replace it as
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soon
as possible
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please
or if can't then return my money. I give
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aa
full payment by
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cheque
.
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I
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am regular
customer your store
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so
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please
solve this issue.

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I
looking forward to your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Karmjeet
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kaur
.
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IELTS letter You have recently bought a tv and it arrived damaged write a letter to the store manager

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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