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You have found a summer job at a hotel. Write to the hotel, ntroducing yourself. Write 220-260 words. Refer to yur studies and experience, explain what you hote to learn from the job and ask questions about the hotel or yur work

You have found a summer job at a hotel. Write to the hotel, ntroducing yourself. Write 220-260 words. Refer to yur studies and experience, explain what you hote to learn from the job and ask questions about the hotel or yur work y733M
To whom it may concern, I would like to apply for the position of receptionist which I saw advertised in internet. I have a reasonable command for communication with other people and being a very resolutive person. At present, i have just finished my second year of Business school and for this summer I want to keep working. I also have worked in shops as Zara or Stradivarius so I have experience talking with people as I was the saleswoman. I also have worked as A waitress so if I need to reemplace any other worker, I could do it. The job will give me the opportunity to learn how a hotel works and everything I would need to know for the future as I would like to work in something related to hotels in a future. I know that a hotel has a lot of work that most people don’t usually DO. My studies will be also helpful because I could help with the economics problem in case you need them. I’m available to start working as soon as you need it. I don’t live far away from the hotel so most of the times I could go whenever you tell me. If I need anything like a phone work or a laptop, will it be provided by the hotel or do I need it to buy it by myself? If you need any more details, please do not hesitate to contact me Yours faithfully, Lucía Cidoncha
To whom it may concern,

I would like to apply for the position of receptionist which I
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saw
advertised in internet. I have a reasonable command for communication with other
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people
and being a
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very
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resolutive
person.

At present,
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i
have
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just
finished my second year of Business school and for this summer I want to
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keep
working. I
also
have worked in shops as Zara or Stradivarius
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so
I have experience talking with
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people
as I was the saleswoman. I
also
have worked as A waitress
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so
if I
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need
to
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reemplace
any other worker, I could do it.

The job will give me the opportunity to learn how a
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hotel
works and everything I would
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need
to know for the future as I would like to
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work
in something related to
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hotels
in a future. I know that a
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hotel
has
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a lot of
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work
that most
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people
don’t
usually
DO. My studies will be
also
helpful
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because
I could
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help
with the economics problem in case you
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need
them.

I’m available to
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start
working as
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soon
as you
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need
it. I don’t
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live
far away from the
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hotel
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so
Consider using "most of the time" if you mean "usually" or "very often".
most of the times
I could go whenever you
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tell
me. If I
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need
anything like a phone
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work
or a laptop, will it
be provided
by the
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hotel
or do I
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need
it to
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buy
it by myself?

If you
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need
any more
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details
,
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please
do not hesitate to contact me

Yours
faithfully
,

Lucía
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Cidoncha
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IELTS letter You have found a summer job at a hotel. Write to the hotel, ntroducing yourself. Write 220-260 words. Refer to yur studies and experience, explain what you hote to learn from the job and ask questions about the hotel or yur work

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
247 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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