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Write a letter to the railway officer of your city for departure late .

Write a letter to the railway officer of your city for departure late. JVpmD

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain about a serious delay created by a local railway station. Which has cost me my job. Last Sunday I went to Chandigarh by National express to appear an interview for a job. However, there was a small dispute between the staff and management. The staff went on an immediate strike. Which, was called the only after six hours. Owing to this, I was late by Seven hours, when I was reached Chandigarh. I was one of the two candidate to be interviewed for the job. But as, I reached I was informed that the an other candidate was appointed. I tried hard to explain my problem, but the management decisions remain unchanged. I feel frustrated as my career has been ruined. I loss a great opportunity because of, such a silly reason. I feel that all those involved in delay should be penalized so that, they understand their responsibilities. I hope this letter will awaken the management to serve the community in a better way. Yours faithfully, Jhon.

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain about a serious delay created by a local railway station. “Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
 has cost me my job. Last Sunday I went to Chandigarh by National express to appear an interview for a job. However
, there was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 dispute between the staff and management. The staff went on an immediate strike. Which, was called
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 after six hours. Owing to this, I was late by Seven hours, when I was reached
 Chandigarh. I was one of the two candidate to be interviewed
 for the job. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 as, I reached I was informed
 that the This word is normally spelled as one.another
an other
 candidate was appointed
. I tried This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my problem, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the management decisions remain unchanged. I feel frustrated as my career has been ruined
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
Did you mean "lost" (past tense of the verb 'lose')?lost
loss
 a great opportunity This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of, such a silly reason. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 feel that all those involved in delay should be penalized
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that, they understand their responsibilities. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope this letter will awaken the management to serve the community in a better way. Yours faithfully
, Possible spelling mistake found.JohnJonHONHonJSONJ hon
Jhon
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