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Writing a letter to your friend advising about studying this subject in the university

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Dear Samantha, I am glad to hear that you are considering to take-up Engineering course at ABC University from where I also graduated two years back. I must admit that it is a good choice, and you will get great learning experience studying this course. When I enrolled in this course, first two semesters consisted of basic science and mathematical subjects, and thereafter core civil engineering subjects were taught from third to sixth semester. However, seventh and eight semesters will be practical based including summer internship which will be arranged by the university. Due to established industrial links, this university offers great advantage over the others and would be my preference. Other than that, infrastructure offer various labs and libraries. The faculty is highly experienced, and they also focus on professional learning which is an added value feature. Admissions in the college starts in March but you should submit admission forms earliest by January as seats fill-up pretty quick due to large number of applicants and limited seats. Procedure for enrolment is very smooth but you will have to provide some old school records and marksheets. So good to keep them handy as well. I hope you found this information useful and please do keep in touch in case you need any information or call me anytime to discuss about anything else like hostel facilities or canteen etc. Wishing you good luck. Best Wishes John
Dear Samantha,

I am glad to hear that you are considering to take-up Engineering course at ABC University from where I
also
graduated two years back. I
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must
admit that it is a
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good
choice, and you will
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get
great learning experience studying this course.

When I enrolled in this course,
first
two semesters consisted of basic science and mathematical subjects, and thereafter core civil engineering subjects
were taught
from third to sixth semester.
However
, seventh and eight semesters will be practical based including summer internship which will
be arranged
by the university.

Due to established industrial links, this university offers great advantage over the others and would be my preference. Other than that, infrastructure offer various labs and libraries. The faculty is
highly
experienced, and they
also
focus on professional learning which is an
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added
value feature.

Admissions in the college
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starts
in March
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you should submit admission forms earliest by January as seats fill-up pretty quick due to large number of applicants and limited seats. Procedure for
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enrolment
is
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very
smooth
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but
you will
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provide
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some
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school records and
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marksheets
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good
to
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keep
them handy
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I hope you found this information useful and
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please
do
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keep
in touch in case you need any information or call me anytime to
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discuss about anything
else like hostel facilities or canteen etc.

Wishing you
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good
luck.

Best Wishes

John
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IELTS letter Writing a letter to your friend advising about studying this subject in the university

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234 words
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