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You need to take leave from your work for almost a month for some personal reasons. Write a letter to your Manager. In your letter: • Explain the reason for your leave & the length of your leave. • Explain how you intend to deliver the task that was given to you recently and has to be turned in in a week’s time. • Explain how & who will look after your work while you are away.

You need to take leave from your work for almost a month for some personal reasons. Write a letter to your Manager. In your letter: • Explain the reason for your leave & the length of your leave. • Explain how you intend to deliver the task that was given to you recently and has to be turned in in a week’s time. • Explain how & who will look after your work while you are away. da7o
Dear Mr. Sam, I am writing this letter to request you to grant me leave for 30 days as I need to take my parents for a medical check up. As you are aware, they have grown quite old and as the only son, I must impart my duties towards them. I wish to travel on 01-May-2021 and would resume my duties on 31-May-2021. As I have 30 more days, I would like to deliver the responsibilities that was given to me in a week's time. Also, in my absence, I will train my team lead to handle all the queries that will be redirected to me. I am sure, after a few days of training, she will be able to handle the work smoothly as I do. I would be grateful if you could grant me the leave. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Neel Goswami
Dear Mr. Sam,

I am writing this letter to request you to grant me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
for 30 days as I need to take my parents for a medical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
up. As you are aware, they have grown quite
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old
and as the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
son, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
impart my duties towards them. I wish to travel on 01-May-2021 and would resume my duties on 31-May-2021.

As I have 30 more days, I would like to deliver the responsibilities that was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to me in a week's time.

Also
, in my absence, I will train my team lead to handle all the queries that will
be redirected
to me. I am sure, after a few days of training, she will be able to handle the work
smoothly
as I do.

I would be grateful if you could grant me the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Neel
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Goswami
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IELTS letter You need to take leave from your work for almost a month for some personal reasons. Write a letter to your Manager. In your letter: • Explain the reason for your leave & the length of your leave. • Explain how you intend to deliver the task that was given to you recently and has to be turned in in a week’s time. • Explain how & who will look after your work while you are away.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
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