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You need to explain the following: When and where you hired it. Describe how the accident happened. What kind of action did you take after the accident. You should write at least 150 words.

You need to explain the following: When and where you hired it. Describe how the accident happened. What kind of action did you take after the accident. o6b9g
Dear Sir, I am one of your clients who rented a vehicle from your company. I am writing to inform you that I was involved in a minor car accident that happened last weekend. We planned a trip to Batangas City for the holidays and since all of my friends do not own any vehicle, I opted to rent from your good company. I choose to hire your black Toyota Camry sedan since we are just three who will join the said trip. I rented your car for 5 days from July 22, 2021, until July 26, 2021. Unfortunately, while I was driving along Balagtas avenue this morning, a fast motorcycle suddenly overtook from our back while I am about turn left where the Camella Subdivision is located. I am sure that I turned on the signal before turning the car to the left. A strong collision happened resulted in a deformed side panel by the driver's side. Good thing that no one from us was hurt even the motorist who only got small scratches on his both arms. The traffic enforcer had seen the incident that day and two police officers came at once to assist us, then they took us to the police station together with the driver of the motorcycle in Balagtas. The motorist negotiated and promised to pay 10, 000 for the damage that was brought by the accident. I would like to ask if the said amount is enough for repairing the damages. I hope you understand the situation. Please contact me if you have any further questions. Here is my mobile number 09214356789. Yours faithfully, (Signature) Stephanie Mirando Client
Dear Sir,

I am one of your clients who rented a vehicle from your
company
. I am writing to inform you that I
was involved
in a minor car accident that happened last weekend.

We planned a trip to
Batangas
City for the holidays and since all of my friends do not
own
any vehicle, I opted to rent from your
good
company
. I choose to hire your black Toyota Camry sedan since we are
just
three who will
join
the said trip. I rented your car for 5 days from July 22, 2021, until July 26, 2021.

Unfortunately, while I was driving along
Balagtas
avenue this morning, a
fast
motorcycle
suddenly
overtook from our back while I am about turn
left
where the
Camella
Subdivision
is located
. I am sure that I turned on the signal
before
turning the car to the
left
. A strong collision happened resulted in a deformed side panel by the driver's side.
Good
thing that no one from us
was hurt
even the motorist who
only
got
small
scratches on his both arms.

The traffic enforcer had
seen
the incident that day and two police officers came at once to assist us, then they took us to the police station together with the driver of the motorcycle in
Balagtas
. The motorist negotiated and promised to pay 10, 000 for the damage that
was brought
by the accident. I would like to ask if the said amount is
enough
for repairing the damages.

I hope you understand the situation.
Please
contact me if you have any
further
questions. Here is my mobile number 09214356789.

Yours
faithfully
,

(Signature)

Stephanie
Mirando


Client
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IELTS letter You need to explain the following: When and where you hired it. Describe how the accident happened. What kind of action did you take after the accident.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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