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You need to breach your tenancy agreement with your landlord as you wish to give up your flat and return home as soon as possible to be with your family which is presently in the middle of a crisis.

You need to breach your tenancy agreement with your landlord as you wish to give up your flat and return home as soon as possible to be with your family which is presently in the middle of a crisis. rbGEn
Dear Mr. Khan, I hope that you are in the pink of your health. I feel sorry to let you know about someunexpected changes in my plan due to certain circumstances. I have to return to myhometown as soon as possible. I received a phone call from my father last night informingthat my grandfather is serious due to his critical cardiac condition. He has been hospitalizedand is soon to be operated. Before operation, he wishes to see me as I am his onlygrandson. 1 am not sure when I am going to return. He does not wish me to return till he is dischargedfrom the hospital and gets back to his normal health. According to the doctor, he will haveto be hospitalised for 1 to 2 months. Unfortunately, I am not able to give you 3 months'notice in advance according to our agreement. I had paid 2 months' rent in advance, but Icould stay only for 10 days. I hope you would understand my situation and refund 1 month'srent. It would be very kind of you and I would be highly grateful to you for the same. Thanking you and hoping for your kind cooperation. Yours sincerely, Ishika
Dear Mr. Khan, I hope that you are in the pink of your health. I feel sorry to
let
you know about
someunexpected
changes
in my plan due to certain circumstances. I
have to
return to
myhometown
as
soon
as possible.
I
received a phone call from my father last night
informingthat
my grandfather is serious due to his critical cardiac condition. He has been
hospitalizedand
is
soon
to
be operated
.
Before
operation, he wishes to
see
me as I am his
onlygrandson
. 1 am not sure when I am going to return. He does not wish me to return till he is
dischargedfrom
the hospital and
gets
back to his normal health. According to the doctor, he will
haveto
be
hospitalised
for 1 to 2 months. Unfortunately, I am not able to give you 3 months'notice in advance according to our agreement. I had paid 2 months' rent in advance,
but
Icould
stay
only
for 10 days. I hope you would understand my situation and refund 1 month'
srent
. It would be
very
kind of you and I would be
highly
grateful to you for the same. Thanking you and hoping for your kind cooperation.

Yours
sincerely
,
Ishika
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IELTS letter You need to breach your tenancy agreement with your landlord as you wish to give up your flat and return home as soon as possible to be with your family which is presently in the middle of a crisis.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
197 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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