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Write a true story for a minimum of 100 words. It can be from your own life or a story you read in the newspaper or on the internet. Try to use as many - ly adverbs as possible to make your writing more interesting.

Write a true story for a minimum of 100 words. It can be from your own life or a story you read in the newspaper or on the internet. Try to use as many - ly adverbs as possible to make your writing more interesting. ewwYx
In the summer of 4 years ago, my father and I went back to our hometown to visit our grandparents. They live in a small village. We had to go a long way and cross a small bridge to get there. Because there is a stream under the bridge, every time it rains heavily, the bridge is flooded. When we got there about an hour, it started to rain heavily. We didn't bring a raincoat, so they decided to have lunch at my grandparents' house and come home when the rain stopped.
In the summer of 4 years ago, my father and I went back to our hometown to visit our grandparents. They
live
in a
small
village. We had to go a long way and cross a
small
bridge to
get
there.
Because
there is a stream under the bridge, every time it rains
heavily
, the bridge
is flooded
. When we
got
there about an hour, it
started
to rain
heavily
. We didn't bring a raincoat,
so
they decided to have lunch at my grandparents'
house
and
come
home when the rain
stopped
.
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IELTS letter Write a true story for a minimum of 100 words. It can be from your own life or a story you read in the newspaper or on the internet. Try to use as many - ly adverbs as possible to make your writing more interesting.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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