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Write a letter to a friend about your new accomodation where you moved

Write a letter to a friend about your new accomodation where you moved M339e
Dear MubinaSorry i have not written for few monthes. Did you hear about my new accomodation? I am delighted to tell you that, because I know you didn't inform this news. I moved to new accomodation. Last letters I said I was going to new house where I was going to choose in England or New York. As you can see, I achieved my aims, but I didn't find cheaper in these states so I had to select in Britain which capital city. I bought that accomodation 2 billion dollar. There is no denying that, I am so happy. In addition, new house, culture and Britain's atmosphere are giving me lots of joy and interests. These things affect to my mood. Tomorrow I am going to buy furnitures which are need to my home. Actually, I had bought before but I wanted new things to new house. There are 4 rooms in there. It consist of bathroom, living room, badroom and kitchen. There are number of art pieces on the wallpaper. Every morning, sun shines in windows. At that time, I am so so happy because I am living actually now. At these time, I am single and alone. So i will offer you that you live with me. I am looking forward to hearing from you again. Take care of yourselfLots of love Mubina
Dear
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MubinaSorry
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i
have not written for few
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monthes
. Did you hear about my
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new
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accomodation
? I
am delighted
to
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tell
you that,
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because
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news
. I
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moved
to
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new
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accomodation
. Last letters I said I was going to
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new
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house
where I was going to choose in England or
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New
York. As you can
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see
, I achieved my aims,
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but
I didn't find cheaper in these states
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so
I had to select in Britain which capital city. I
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bought
that
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accomodation
2 billion
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dollar
. There is no denying that, I am
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so
happy.
In addition
,
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new
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house
, culture and Britain's atmosphere are giving me lots of joy and interests. These things affect to my mood. Tomorrow I am going to
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buy
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furnitures
which
are need
to my home. Actually, I had
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bought
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before
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but
I wanted
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new
things to
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new
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house
. There are 4 rooms in there. It
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consist
of bathroom, living room,
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badroom
and kitchen. There are number of art pieces on the wallpaper. Every morning, sun shines in windows. At that time, I am
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so
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so
happy
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because
I am living actually
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now
. At these time, I am single and alone.
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So
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i
will offer you that you
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live
with me. I am looking forward to hearing from you again. Take care of
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yourselfLots
of
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love
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Mubina

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend about your new accomodation where you moved

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
224 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
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