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I am Bivek Pandey from Kathmandu Nepal. Talking about my family members, My father is a lecturer and my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest among my family members. Besides this

I am Bivek Pandey from Kathmandu Nepal. Talking about my family members, My father is a lecturer and my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest among my family members. Besides this kLLOO

Intro partI am Bivek Pandey from Kathmandu Nepal. Talking about my family members, My father is a lecturer and my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest among my family members. Besides this I love watching movies, reading articles and playing cricket. educational backgroundAfter 12th standard, I moved to Kathmandu to pursue my higher study, IT was my field of interest so, I joined Nagarjuna college of information technology which is affiliated by Tribhuvan university in order to pursue a course Bachelors in computer science and information technology. In 2019 I successfully achieved a bachelor's degree and started to search for a job within the relevant field to get some work experience. To be frank, I loved being introduced as a punctual, hardworking, and humble guy. Being a developer I am also a problem solver and critical thinker. Once I got a chance to lead a small team, might be my boss saw a leadership quality within me. thankyou

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 from Kathmandu Nepal. Talking about my family members, My father is a lecturer and my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest among my family members. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Besides,
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love
 watching movies, reading articles and playing cricket.

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educational
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backgroundAfter
 12th standard, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to Kathmandu to pursue my higher study, IT was my field of interest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
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Nagarjuna
 college of information technology which is affiliated
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2019 I
successfully
 achieved a bachelor's degree and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to search for a job within the relevant field to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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some
 work experience.

To be frank, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
being introduced
 as a punctual, hardworking, and humble guy. Being a developer I am also
 a problem solver and critical thinker. Once I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a chance to lead a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 team, might be my boss This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a leadership quality within me.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThankyou
thankyou