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You missed a flight due to a problem at airport #describe what happened that cause you to miss the flight #explain how missing flight affected you #make it clear what you would like airline to do

You missed a flight due to a problem at airport #describe what happened that cause you to miss the flight #explain how missing flight affected you #make it clear what you would like airline to do EnnD
Dear sir, I am Jason and I booked a flight last week on 25 feburary, 2021 at 12 pm with Air India. I am writing this letter to describe unsatisfactory experience with your flight at airport. I had a flight with your company from India Delhi airport to Toronto Pearson airport. As, I am very punctual so, I reached the airport at 8 am. When I enter in airport, I saw long queue however I was not worried about the queue as I had plenty of time. I waited there for my turn and security guy checked all my document specially corona test report. After, 30 minutes later same guy approach to me and said as per new guideline you have do test again. I explained that I have flight in next 15 minutes buy he clearly said I cannot leave the country without test. I had a very important meeting on prospective day because of your staff I missed that meeting. Although, I explained everything to client and they understood situation but, at airport no-one helped me to book new flight from your staff and I booked ticket with other airline. I need my full money back as refund because I missed my flight due to staff and make sure you will take care of customer convenience. Yours faithfully, John
Dear sir,

I am Jason and I booked a
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last week on 25
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feburary
, 2021 at 12 pm with Air India. I am writing this letter to
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unsatisfactory experience with your
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had a
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with your
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from India Delhi
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to Toronto Pearson
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. As, I am
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punctual
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, I reached the
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at 8 am. When I enter in
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, I
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saw
long queue
however
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of time. I waited there for my turn and security guy
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checked
all my document
specially
corona
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report. After, 30 minutes later same guy approach to me and said as per new guideline you have
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again. I
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that I have
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in
next
15 minutes
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clearly
said I cannot
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the country without
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.

I had a
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meeting on prospective day
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of your staff I missed that meeting. Although, I
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explained
everything to
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client and
they understood situation
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, at
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no-one
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helped
me to book new
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from your staff and I booked ticket with other airline.

I need my full money back as refund
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because
I missed my
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due to staff and
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sure you will take care of customer convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

John
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IELTS letter You missed a flight due to a problem at airport #describe what happened that cause you to miss the flight #explain how missing flight affected you #make it clear what you would like airline to do

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  American English
6 paragraphs
220 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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